I am a Year 5 student at Panmure Bridge School, Auckland, New Zealand. My teachers are Mr Wong and Mr Ogilvie.
Tuesday, December 15, 2020
SLJ Week 1 Activity 2
This week for activity two is to comment. You have to fill out a form and blog it. I chose this comment because she is from the Summer Learning Journey Team.
My name is Shannon, and I’m from the Summer Learning Journey.
What a cool responding comment, Renee will be thrilled to see your reply and that it’s your chosen comment for the activity! I like how you start by thanking Renee and being super positive! I also really like how you ask a question at the end. Questions are a great way to engage readers and bloggers and start a conversation! Ka pai!
Have you gotten many comments yet? What other things do you think you could include in a quality comment?
Have you considered including a link to your original blog post for your readers so they can easily see the comment you’re replying to?
Thank you for a positive comment. I have got some comment, I included some positive feedback and some helpful reply. I should include a link so the readers can easily see the comment and who I am replying to. What are you doing for the summer?
I’m heading over to the West Coast to hang out with my family! I think we’re planning on doing some kayaking and having a bonfire. What are you doing for summer?
ReplyDeleteKia Ora Ahli,
My name is Shannon, and I’m from the Summer Learning Journey.
What a cool responding comment, Renee will be thrilled to see your reply and that it’s your chosen comment for the activity! I like how you start by thanking Renee and being super positive! I also really like how you ask a question at the end. Questions are a great way to engage readers and bloggers and start a conversation! Ka pai!
Have you gotten many comments yet? What other things do you think you could include in a quality comment?
Have you considered including a link to your original blog post for your readers so they can easily see the comment you’re replying to?
Ka kite anō,
Shannon (SLJ)
Kia Ora Shannon,
DeleteThank you for a positive comment. I have got some comment, I included some positive feedback and some helpful reply. I should include a link so the readers can easily see the comment and who I am replying to. What are you doing for the summer?
Kind Regards
Ahli
Kia Ora Ahli,
DeleteGood job on getting some more comments!
I’m heading over to the West Coast to hang out with my family! I think we’re planning on doing some kayaking and having a bonfire. What are you doing for summer?
Have a great day!
Shannon (SLJ)